Kia ora bloggers I have been learning about proper emailing in this picture you will see an email saying why animals should be able to go on public transport.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, March 26, 2021
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.

Hi Samuel My names Matilda, how is your day going? I love how many ideas you have for people that need service dogs to do there day to day activity's and I totally agree that they should be aloud service dogs on public transport! Its really good to see that you've used capital letters for your name and Mr Bells-is he your home-base teacher? He was my teacher in korimako . Maybe next time you could write a little bit more about why you have done this task & how you have done this awesome work. Its so cool how we can see all of your work you have blogged and I cant wait to write another comment for you! Keep up the amazing work :)
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